alanisnotcool's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Krowe - GHOSTS]

Loving these chill vibes. Taintedvocals was right about the vocals, they are nice but a tad harsh/piercing.

Sound choice is all on point as well as the mixing and sound placement. The buildup drums in the intro could be improved. When it breaks around 1:30 it would be great to hear the track go into a nice breakdown with an orchestral string and a bass note change to go along with a new variation of that cool arp melody. Then you could tie it all up and bring it back like you did here.

Even though I dont know you, glad you're back! lol take care

KroweMusic responds:

Thanks!

[Rebuild]

Nice vibes dude. Dont worry about the pace that you're producing, there will be varying paces as your life varies as well. I like your sound, looking forward to hearing more!

Alan

Hippokopter responds:

Thanks for the advice, that actually really helps.

[Palace Harbor]

Nintendo-y! =P Im feeling it but the sound does get to be too much after a while. good melodies though!

nuFF3 responds:

Thanks

[The Hearts Gradient (Original Mix)]

Hey dude!

Well, simply put, you remind me of my younger self when it comes to having so many different ideas or themes in one track. You dont have a problem with melodies or ideas obviously, but something that I have learned over the years is that when you stick to just 1 or 2 ideas (usually 2) in a track and build off of those, then it could greatly improve the track becoming a memorable one and have more impact. Take care! keep it up

by the way I just uploaded a new Prog Trance track, check it out if you want!

LJTLegendaryL responds:

Thanks for the message, you take care as well ^^

also I know about using 2 ideas, the thing is that I wanted to give this song more variation instead of sticking to 2 ideas, but thanks for the feedback

[Losing Track of Time]

hey man thanks for the review on my track! it's nice to see you making music that is similar to my taste, I'm digging it :-) I use FL Studio too it's a great program. keep practicing I can tell thatyou have talent.watch out for harsh sounding higher end frequencies in your sounds. nothing that eq can't solve. take care!

8-BitCat responds:

Thanks for the review c: and I'm definitely still learning stuff for making music :o and yea, I'll try to watch out for those harsh sounds, sorry about that <.< anyways, thanks man ^~^

[The Definiton of Self]

nice vibe =) its not that groovy though, and the instruments sound very amateur-ish. but you do have a decent grasp of placing your sounds in the right places with panning and reverb. keep working =D

DESHIEL responds:

This is a site for amateurs ya know :)

[Eintritt - Schumann]

Like someone said already, very well played. I love the piano because you can tell such a detailed story with just one instrument. nice job!

Musicious responds:

Thank you very much. That's is the reason I like the piano, too. :)