alanisnotcool's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Levia - Suffocate -wip-]

too much harsh high frequencies. keep working =) ideas arent bad

LeviaNeo responds:

Thanks for the quick review. I toned those high frequencies down for you. Tell me what you think.

[Dullen]

give each instrument their own space in the frequency spectrum. ideas arent bad. good luck =)

[Infinite Revolutions]

great job! please get rid of the auto-tune or lessen the effect of it at least, it really does seem out of place. your sound is great keep going!

seatellite responds:

no auto-tune, it's just a large amount of reverb, used to simulate singing in a chamber.

[HNO3]

needs deep sound

needs a deeper bass to balance it out, it sounds like everything is on a high pass filter, keep working ;)

demofreak responds:

sounds a little better with headphones on but ya i agree, thks for the review

[Chords And Love]

not bad

side chain is a lil heavy, and the sounds need to be mixed better including the percs, and the bass that comes in later drowns out the pluck, just tone it downa lil, anyways nice ideas keep working, and dont use "chords of life" too much i know it soudns nice ;P

MTLane responds:

chords of life?

[Swish [WIP, Dubstep]]

pretty cool

yea like one person said, it is kind of squeaky and although there is a good amount of bass coming through, the high pitched sounds kind of take away from it in the EQ. but i do like it or i would not bother to write a review =) good job

Or4nges responds:

I agree, it does tend to get squeaky. Sometimes my headphones kind of muffle the higher pitches, so I turn em up more to hear em. I'll make sure to fix that.

[Cows Have Feelings]

keep it up. i just uploaded a dance demo too

check it out =) i can hear alot of classic trance influence in this song =P btw my demo is called "New EDM WIP" take it easy =)

Alan

GodBlock responds:

Thanks for the advert, asshole

[/_Asteroid_\]

instruments

the instruments could be a little more original, i feel like ive heard these same trance sounds from amateurs around the world, try to stand out next time. keep working! =)

WildeKeizer responds:

Yeah, I am low on sounds. I don't really know how to make my own yet.

[Premoeffect - Green Plums]

not bad

not bad, mixing could be alot better , the drums are kinda drowned out but yea keep working. try to be original

PrEmoEffect responds:

If I made the drums significantly stand out from the mix... it wouldn't be a mix then would it? Please try to elaborate on negative criticism so that it doesn't seem quite like invective.

[DJ Eclypse Walk on Water]

too fast

what is this like 180bpm? try doing 140-145bpm

pyogerjumper responds:

tried it but it kinda screwed up the song this was the best i could leave it at without making it worse