alanisnotcool's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[SalemDreams]

nice creepy/mysterious vibe! its like listening to Count Dracula's playlist on his iPod. The increase in BPM is pretty cool, the transition was a little awkward though. Overall i dig it! i actually listened to the whole thing which is rare =P keep it up!

[The Smell of Summer Seashells]

Great job =) This is very pleasing to the ears and the soul. I love the sounds as the ocean as well and like to use them in my tracks also! thanks for your feedback on my track! take care

HalfStepTides responds:

Thank you for your feedback! The ocean is love!
Have a good day.

[Alsatia]

very hypnotizing in a good way. It kind of feels a little thin, i think you could add a string as a layer or something to make it a little fuller in certain areas. It gets repetitive pretty quickly but its still good =) Mind giving me your feedback on my latest audio upload? take care =)

[Magnitude (NG Cut)]

I like! uplifting indeed and its mixed quite nicely in the way that trance should be! would you mind giving me your feedback on my latest upload? =) take care and dont stop making music ever!

[Clarity (Aslal Bootleg Remix)]

sounds pretty cool =P i like those vocals! do you know where i could get them?

aslal responds:

Zedd posted an acapella on his Soundcloud, but he has taken it down. However, other people have uploaded it to YouTube.

[Bossa Nova Baby]

easy listening indeed =) very ear pleasing stuff! good work!

DavidGrossmanMusic responds:

Thanks, I'm glad you like it. My combo's having a lot of fun playing it and will hopefully perform it in March sometime.

[much excite]

cool idea =) me likey. good instrument choices and nice atmosphere. mind checking out my latest preview that i have just uploaded?

yagru responds:

thanks man!

if you're talking about deep pursuit i would very much enjoy listening to the full track. sounds like you cut it off right when i would've liked it to continue. how dare you.

ditto to your track my friend! especially diggin that synth that comes in around :51 for that brief second. BRILLANCE

[Materialization]

good job on taking my advice, it made a big difference! =) good work

Exilious responds:

Thanks! You should check out the last song by the way. It was the one I was talking about, but this one is good too. Thanks again!~ :D

[Technotastic (WIP)]

melody is lacking. the off beat synth that you can barely hear needs to be taken out and replaced with a better instrument and melody. The drums overall are fairly poor and the main lead arp melody doesnt really take you anywhere. work on your melody progressions. listen to other tracks and try to mimic things you like and it will make you better. take care =) feel free to listen to my tracks

Exilious responds:

I suppose I can understand what you are saying. Honestly, I have considered trying to take a form of a melody I hear from other songs, but I get a bit worried that I would be stealing it, so I try to be as original as possible. I for one actually enjoyed the arp that was being used, but I suppose I can try something new altogether. Nothing wrong with a fresh start. I'll take what you said in to consideration for sure. Thanks for taking your time to review this! I WILL listen to your tracks. :D

EDIT: Wait. Now I see what you mean about the main arp and melody. It IS lacking. Yeah. I think I'ma just remake the song altogether. I'll just look around first for some inspiration. Thanks again!

[Chili Lime Popcorn Redux]

Is that trilian i hear? cool bass and good instrument choice. i like the arp melody. keep up the good work!